Life

Its outside of us somwhere.?? Inside of us; it is in our being.' And breathing, hearing, seeing.' In touching..We are a whole.' I Must open up.' Defeat is passing The spirit is not constrained, death Is but a perception, eternity 'is real.' As are we! nothing is the division. We are comprehending' dreams are Part talisman.. Our experience's are Woven in Gods eternal plans.'

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David Fisher

Date: 10/19/2023 6:20:00 PM

Enjoyed your description of life; I think it is spot on. I wrote a poem probably a decade ago showing that it's god's world, and we live to provide the pictures, something like that.

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/19/2023 10:31:00 PM

We are but human David, we know so little..? The eye has Not seen, the ear not heard That which God holds in store.'

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2023 11:17:00 AM

A creative write. I love your ending. So True... Have a blessed day.............

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/19/2023 1:26:00 PM

May you be also blessed Paula, you know I put this In rhyme catagory..I did Consider verse..Yet i think Its makeup meshes in a rhyme of purpose.? Do you See that.? See ya later.)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2023 6:35:00 AM

- Interesting and great writing, Joe - Hope all is well with you :) - hugs

Joe Maverick
Date: 10/19/2023 8:01:00 AM

Well thank you Anne-lise.'