Joe Maverick Poet Rhyme

Life

Its outside of us somwhere.??
Inside of us; it is in our being.'
And breathing, hearing, seeing.'
In touching..We are a whole.' I
Must open up.' Defeat is passing
The spirit is not constrained, death
Is but a perception, eternity 'is real.'
As are we! nothing is the division.
We are comprehending' dreams are
Part talisman.. Our experience's are 
Woven in Gods eternal plans.'

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David Fisher October 19, 2023 at 6:20 PM Enjoyed your description of life; I think it is spot on. I wrote a poem probably a decade ago showing that it's god's world, and we live to provide the pictures, something like that. Joe Maverick October 19, 2023 at 10:31 PM We are but human David, we know so little..? The eye has Not seen, the ear not heard That which God holds in store.'

Paula Goldsmith October 19, 2023 at 11:17 AM A creative write. I love your ending. So True... Have a blessed day............. Joe Maverick October 19, 2023 at 1:26 PM May you be also blessed Paula, you know I put this In rhyme catagory..I did Consider verse..Yet i think Its makeup meshes in a rhyme of purpose.? Do you See that.? See ya later.)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2023 at 6:35 AM - Interesting and great writing, Joe - Hope all is well with you :) - hugs Joe Maverick October 19, 2023 at 8:01 AM Well thank you Anne-lise.'