I personally believe in life after death, but the poem didn't go that way. Excuse me!
Life ---- Life is what goes before, For death is long and grounded. When you're dead It's close the door To all you've ever wanted. Life is but a little time, It's music, noise, all sounded. When you're dead It's bang the door... Too late for what you wanted. Life is a grand old time, And death is long and grounded. When you're dead There is no more, Except your bones. Confound it! 6/27/2022
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