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beautiful skies eluminate my eyes sun beaming down on my back and thighs as i write this poem i think to myself letting every word flow i feel locked in a cell a cell so small so enriched with enclosure happiness is an issue im looking for a motive i see the grass green but not perfect the same as my life my mistakes are my potions i picture new beginnings i dream things get better living is an obstacle people try to be settled pretending everythings okay hoping things will change racing to be the best tripping up over our ways

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/28/2008 1:57:00 PM
This is certainly a reality poem. It flows well and cast images one should consider in life. Certainly, there is a way one should walk in love and grace. I like the essence of the poem. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 9/26/2008 4:42:00 PM
hi this is a lovely write, it is filled with hope and fulfillment, take care D-ncye
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Date: 9/26/2008 4:38:00 PM
Interesting reflection. You may want to change eluminate to illuminate in the second line. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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