Life

Life -------- It feels so good to be out and free, jumping hurdles or climbing a tree. This is what I truly call life, like in your heart has been thrust joy’s knife, He runs and plays and shouts of joy, playing pirates and shouting “ Land Ahoy ”. Then he comes and nicely sleeps, until the sun from amongst the clouds peeps. Again he wakes and plays and runs , Therefore he begins again all the funs. 05/17/2020 Action Adventure Poetry Contest

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/16/2020 8:33:00 AM

I like the innocence and playfulness of this piece. A belated welcome to the soup.

Rashi Soni
Date: 6/16/2020 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much of your kind welcome and visit. Rashi

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/12/2019 11:08:00 PM

beautiful poetic expression

Rashi Soni
Date: 1/1/2020 5:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Rashi

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/4/2019 9:17:00 PM

Rashi, congratulations on your Honorable Mention Win in the Invitation to Play contest. I enjoyed the sense of fun and active engagement in this poem. There were so many good poems that it got down to a just thanks standoff.

Rashi Soni
Date: 10/16/2019 7:54:00 AM

Thank you Ma’am. Your appreciation means a lot to me. Thanks a lot for your encouragement.