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Life

As she layed in the grass , she saw the sky She felt the dew on the flowers in the early morning She listened to the sounds of the birds at that point she knew she was living life . by Lauren wisher

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/5/2019 3:18:00 PM
Hi Lauren and welcome to PS, hope you stay awhile. This is a nice piece with vivid imagery giving one such a colourful picture, you show real promise so keep spilling the ink!
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Date: 1/5/2019 11:31:00 AM
Nice. Aesthetic and beautiful.
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