Life

As she layed in the grass , she saw the sky 
She felt the dew on the flowers in the early morning 
She listened to the sounds of the birds at that point she knew she was living life .
      
      by Lauren wisher
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcconnell Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 3:18 PM
Hi Lauren and welcome to PS, hope you stay awhile. This is a nice piece with vivid imagery giving one such a colourful picture, you show real promise so keep spilling the ink!
Evans Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 11:31 AM
Nice. Aesthetic and beautiful.
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