Lies and Blues

I have always looked;
beyond the calm horizon;
and think about you 
With the memoirs of unscrewed;
vows, made of lies and blues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Armstrong Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 12:33 AM
Nice work
Aguila Avatar
December 23, 2017 at 6:02 PM
Thank you so much! :) I must say you have beautiful works :) And Advance Merry Christmas!
Christodoulou Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 5:23 AM
This is an absolutely lovely poem, Merlie! Beautiful use of words and imagery!
Aguila Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Thank you so much! You have beautiful works too! :) Such amazing and heart-warming pieces!
Aguila Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 6:20 AM
This is my first written Tanka so comment down below and let me know what you think of it :) Thank you, loves!
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