Mama Bear Poet Rhyme

Lies

Wonderful words that have no true meaning
You say it all so beautifully but there is no true feeling
Why say words you do not mean?
What you say makes me feel unclean
Truth would be a better thing
The words would finally be an awakening
To see you as you really are
Would finally make me say  au revoir
Away from your lies and bold untruths
To finally become at last astute

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Richard Lamoureux December 3, 2015 at 10:06 AM I remember someone like this! Mama Bear December 3, 2015 at 1:45 PM Rather just remember not know this person. Love Mom

Susan Gentry November 30, 2015 at 12:14 AM I really like this and relate to it. It does make me feel so yucky when someone is lying to me, then and if I find out later too I find it best to be away from it too. Lines flowed and rhymes were natural. Good one! Mama Bear November 30, 2015 at 8:23 AM men lie to make themselves feel good They do not care that they hurt us. Thanks for the visit Blessings Edith

Cecilia Macfarlane November 26, 2015 at 5:18 PM Great question, why lie? I'm with you mama Bear, just tell the truth! Terrific write. Hugs Mama Bear November 26, 2015 at 6:13 PM Some people lie because they have no self worth and when found out it becomes worse for them. Sad indeed thank you for the visit and kind words. Blessings Edith

Eileen Manassian November 20, 2015 at 10:42 PM Hello, dear. What a great poem. If there is no trust....there is nothing. Hugs to you Mama Bear November 21, 2015 at 8:13 AM Thanks for the comments Hope you are feeling like your bright and bubbly self again. Love Edith