Lies

Dear Friends, I am here to elude you. I derive from your effervescent pain. But you wont ever see me coming, not till it's too late. Did you taste that? It was , what you say.."bittersweet". And your heart, what shall it do now? Forever Yours, Lies 5/21/14- Jessica Thompson

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2014 10:38:00 PM

thank you for the comment on my comment... PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/22/2014 10:05:00 PM

Hi Jessica, this is very deep. It kind of reminds me of the friends we should not trust, I call them best friends.. I like how you handled the note... Linda

Jt Nyx
Date: 5/22/2014 10:34:00 PM

Thank you Linda, your words and comments are much appreciated. I just wanted to convey lies , for what they truly are. Take care- Jess :)