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Lie Down

I'm stranded. Can't move. The surface of the earth keeps on calling my body to lie it down To feel the heat And face the sky And I feel lonely Even if there are billion of stars looking down at me I want to close my eyes but I'm scared not of seeing my mind but of seeing the dark I can't feel but I can't stop writing Just let me stay here a little bit more only another few seconds and then I'll stand up I swear.

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Date: 10/19/2024 12:50:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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