Lie Down

I'm stranded.
Can't move.
The surface of the earth keeps on calling my body
to lie it down
To feel the heat 
And face the sky
And I feel lonely
Even if there are billion of stars 
looking down at me
I want to close my eyes
but I'm scared
not of seeing my mind
but of seeing the dark 
I can't feel
but I can't stop writing
Just let me stay here a little bit more
only another few seconds 
and then I'll stand up
I swear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Agustin Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 12:50 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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