Lie Candy

I ate your sweet vows of seduction The truth decay my heart’s destruction

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/27/2016 11:43:00 AM

so few words say so much James!:-) hugs Jan xx

Just James
Date: 9/1/2016 7:03:00 AM

As with design ..."less is more"...:) Tx for the visit Jan

Jean Murray

Date: 8/24/2016 5:02:00 PM

You're so sweet James.

Just James
Date: 8/25/2016 12:35:00 AM

My sweetness my downfall! Thanks for the visit my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2016 11:50:00 PM

Great metaphor!

Just James
Date: 8/23/2016 12:31:00 AM

Thank you Andrea

Betty Janko

Date: 8/19/2016 3:51:00 PM

A lot said in a few lines. That makes a great poem my friend. Sorry about the cavities! Betty

Just James
Date: 8/20/2016 3:44:00 AM

ooo yes those love cavities!! Tx Betty

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/19/2016 11:03:00 AM

Short but says a lot. Sadly, too many actually believe their lies when seducing...but who knows the truth of it all?--certainly kept, so far, from us wanting souls--so we seek our way, if not correctly, at the least, entertainingly, with poetry.

Just James
Date: 8/19/2016 1:18:00 PM

Poetry allows us to explore and say so much..with so little. This my very satirical look at wedding vows!! thanks for visit Joe!