Lie Candy

I ate your sweet vows of seduction
The truth decay my heart’s destruction

betrayalepigram

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Jan Allison

August 27, 2016 at 11:43 AM

so few words say so much James!:-) hugs Jan xx

Just James

September 1, 2016 at 7:03 AM

As with design ..."less is more"...:) Tx for the visit Jan

Jean Murray

August 24, 2016 at 5:02 PM

You're so sweet James.

Just James

August 25, 2016 at 12:35 AM

My sweetness my downfall! Thanks for the visit my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

August 22, 2016 at 11:50 PM

Great metaphor!

Just James

August 23, 2016 at 12:31 AM

Thank you Andrea

Betty Janko

August 19, 2016 at 3:51 PM

A lot said in a few lines. That makes a great poem my friend. Sorry about the cavities! Betty

Just James

August 20, 2016 at 3:44 AM

ooo yes those love cavities!! Tx Betty

Joseph P. DiMino

August 19, 2016 at 11:03 AM

Short but says a lot. Sadly, too many actually believe their lies when seducing...but who knows the truth of it all?--certainly kept, so far, from us wanting souls--so we seek our way, if not correctly, at the least, entertainingly, with poetry.

Just James

August 19, 2016 at 1:18 PM

Poetry allows us to explore and say so much..with so little. This my very satirical look at wedding vows!! thanks for visit Joe!

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