Paula Goldsmith Poet Verse

Licking Gently

Crystal blue                                                                                                                            sparkling water,                                                                                                                        topped with                                                                                                                        white foam.


Licking gently                                                                                                                           the warm                                                                                                                               sandy beach.    


Date Written  9/23/2020


1 Place   Paint A Picture - 7 Lines  Contest Judged:  9/30/2020             Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Paul Callus October 2, 2020 at 8:22 AM I like this image, and the water lapping at the sandy beach. Congratulations on your fine win, Paula. Regards // paul Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2020 at 11:01 AM I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this image. It was fun to write. Enjoy your day...............

Jennifer Proxenos October 2, 2020 at 6:45 AM Congratulations my friend on your wonderful win, an absolute delight. Hugs and kisses Paula. Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2020 at 10:59 AM I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day with hugs...............

Gershon Wolf October 1, 2020 at 6:03 PM Looks like you licked this one alright, Paula. Congrats on your #1 win. Way to go, Gershon Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2020 at 10:57 AM I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was a fun write. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day............

Linda Alice Fowler October 1, 2020 at 5:38 AM Love this picture Paula. Congratulations! Linda Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2020 at 10:56 AM I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day............

Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2020 at 5:03 AM - Congratulations on your win, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2020 at 10:55 AM I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day with hugs...............

Joseph May October 1, 2020 at 4:27 AM Very nicely penned Paula, Congrats on your win Paula Goldsmith October 6, 2020 at 10:52 AM What a great surprise. I have been off the computer. "Thank You," for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day...............

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2020 at 6:20 PM fantastic personification imagery! Paula Goldsmith September 25, 2020 at 8:40 AM Thanks for your note and for your kind words. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day................

Joanna Daniel September 23, 2020 at 11:12 PM A nice picture of the sea you paint, Paula, all the best:) Paula Goldsmith September 24, 2020 at 10:09 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day..................

Susan Ashley September 23, 2020 at 1:51 PM Such a beautiful scene your poem paints, Paula. Vivid serenity and a sensory delight. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Paula Goldsmith September 23, 2020 at 1:55 PM Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like it. It was fun to write. Enjoy your day with best wishes..................