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Licking Gently

Crystal blue sparkling water, topped with white foam. Licking gently the warm sandy beach. Date Written 9/23/2020 1 Place Paint A Picture - 7 Lines Contest Judged: 9/30/2020 Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/2/2020 8:22:00 AM

I like this image, and the water lapping at the sandy beach. Congratulations on your fine win, Paula. Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2020 11:01:00 AM

I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this image. It was fun to write. Enjoy your day...............

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/2/2020 6:45:00 AM

Congratulations my friend on your wonderful win, an absolute delight. Hugs and kisses Paula. Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2020 10:59:00 AM

I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing, for your congratulations and for your kind words. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day with hugs...............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/1/2020 6:03:00 PM

Looks like you licked this one alright, Paula. Congrats on your #1 win. Way to go, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2020 10:57:00 AM

I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was a fun write. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/1/2020 5:38:00 AM

Love this picture Paula. Congratulations! Linda

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2020 10:56:00 AM

I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like it. Enjoy your day............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2020 5:03:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2020 10:55:00 AM

I have been off the computer. Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day with hugs...............

Joseph May

Date: 10/1/2020 4:27:00 AM

Very nicely penned Paula, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2020 10:52:00 AM

What a great surprise. I have been off the computer. "Thank You," for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2020 6:20:00 PM

fantastic personification imagery!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/25/2020 8:40:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your kind words. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/23/2020 11:12:00 PM

A nice picture of the sea you paint, Paula, all the best:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/24/2020 10:09:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a wonderful day..................

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/23/2020 1:51:00 PM

Such a beautiful scene your poem paints, Paula. Vivid serenity and a sensory delight. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/23/2020 1:55:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like it. It was fun to write. Enjoy your day with best wishes..................