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Lickety Split

Like diamonds bathed in sun, Islands in the Caribbean call my name. Kiss me with your sultry Energy and charm. There’s a beach bum waiting for me, with Yellow hair bleached by the sun. Such longing I feel, as he Pulls me to paradise, where. Love blooms at last. If only in a wink-of-the-eye dream, Tropical splendor is mine. * April 13, 2018

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Date: 4/18/2018 9:16:00 PM
Oh who could not resist a Caribbean island holiday in the sun, a sun kissed beach bum included? Wheres that travel brochure?? Much enjoyed Carolyn, brought back good memories....Maria :)
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Date: 4/18/2018 8:13:00 AM
I would not say no to a Caribbean holiday, Carolyn! For many this could turn out to be a holiday of a lifetime, including tropical romance and love. gl in the contest. Hugs // paul
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Date: 4/18/2018 4:02:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Carolyn :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2018 3:41:00 PM
Hi Carolyn , nice to meet :) wonderful style funny and romantic all in one ::))Hugs from Ireland
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Date: 4/17/2018 2:20:00 PM
Had to repost this after accidentally deleting it. Thanks to all who commented previously.
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