Librium Equilibrium - Ii
deaddiction bed
springs stretched taut tense and frazzled
thirst demons replaced
craving for prescription pills
librium equilibrium
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Modified Tanka with syllable count 5-7-5-7-8 (Extra syllable - poetic licence)
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