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Library's Unsaid Rule

The unsaid rule is pretty clear: no chat or laughter welcome here! written 12th September 2017 for Constance's U contest

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Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2017 4:59:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats jack I love the humour here!:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/23/2017 1:05:00 PM

Creative...Short and to the point, Jack! Congrats on your win, my friend. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 9/23/2017 12:00:00 PM

Pretty cleaver, Jack, love the verse congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Constance La France

Date: 9/23/2017 9:14:00 AM

Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest, short and sweet and true, well done!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/13/2017 3:42:00 AM

Oh Jack, it's so nice to see you on here again, and writing such a fabulous write here! I really enjoyed reading your stupendous poem here this morning! As I have read this short piece again and again, it should make it's way to the top of the winner's list! What if you write "no chat or laughter's welcome here!" would that be better? It's harmonious as it is my friend, just thought I'd give you a look at another option! Great Work!!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/12/2017 5:35:00 PM

Shhh definitely no laughter Jack :-( Just think Jack if we ever publish our poems they won't get shelf space in a library:-( hugs jan xx