Library's Unsaid Rule

The unsaid rule is pretty clear:
no chat or laughter welcome here!

written 12th September 2017 for Constance's U contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 4:59 PM
dropping back with my congrats jack I love the humour here!:-) hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 1:05 PM
Creative...Short and to the point, Jack! Congrats on your win, my friend. Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 12:00 PM
Pretty cleaver, Jack, love the verse congratulations on your win hugs Eve
La France Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Jack, congratulations on your win in my contest, short and sweet and true, well done!
Sivey Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 3:42 AM
Oh Jack, it's so nice to see you on here again, and writing such a fabulous write here! I really enjoyed reading your stupendous poem here this morning! As I have read this short piece again and again, it should make it's way to the top of the winner's list! What if you write "no chat or laughter's welcome here!" would that be better? It's harmonious as it is my friend, just thought I'd give you a look at another option! Great Work!!
Allison Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 5:35 PM
Shhh definitely no laughter Jack :-( Just think Jack if we ever publish our poems they won't get shelf space in a library:-( hugs jan xx
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