Liberty

Red, white and blue tooth gel becomes diffused with circular motion.
Vestiges on each yellowed or white pearl, clean and polish.
Liberty to smile with effervescence and brilliancy.

smilesijo

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Gershon Wolf

October 28, 2025 at 7:30 PM

Right up there with stars and stripes underwear and Uncle Sam panties. ~ Kitsch Kargo, Klutch Kargo's brother

Kim Rodrigues

October 28, 2025 at 8:12 PM

Truly…lol

Sara Kendrick

October 28, 2025 at 4:11 AM

Ahh!! Nice one. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I have reached the age that I don't have the white sparkle anymore. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

October 28, 2025 at 6:11 AM

I know what you mean, however you can sparkle in countenance and that beam can be stronger than surface bright! Hugs

William Kelii Kekaula

October 28, 2025 at 3:47 AM

Nicely done, sijo, very poetic with some spice; I do extended versions when doing sijo’s, Aloha.

Kim Rodrigues

October 28, 2025 at 6:11 AM

Coooliooo! Hugs! Keep writing, dear one! Thank you!

Yann Rolland

October 27, 2025 at 5:11 PM

liberty at stake, don't really know, nicely written

Kim Rodrigues

October 28, 2025 at 6:12 AM

We should never take liberty for granted. How blessed to know the Lord who gives us freedom, in Him. Hugs, Mon Amie!

Joseph P. DiMino

October 27, 2025 at 7:20 AM

Yep, keep those choppers clean. Especially when you have teeth like me, roots down to me toes. Never fun when one has to come out. As for the politics, never clean, always a battle for freedom.

Kim Rodrigues

October 27, 2025 at 10:56 AM

Yup, double-up. Hugs…smiles