Christopher Bunton Poet Tail-rhyme

Liberties Slowly Taken

Liberties slowly taken,
"We The People" forsaken,
From our "Leaders" nothing is said.
The economy crashes.
Propaganda T.V. flashes.
Jobs along with answers have fled.


New World Order completed.
Freedom and Saints defeated.
Faith of many shaken.
Deaths long cold rattling groan.
An ancient evil on the throne.
Enemies quickly taken.


For the "Taken" contest

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Richard Lamoureux February 11, 2013 at 7:30 AM We are complacent and gradually more and more is taken. If we are not careful there will be nothing of value left to take. Well written. You are good at this form. Christopher Bunton February 15, 2013 at 8:57 PM Very true. Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A January 25, 2013 at 7:08 PM Christopher, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD Christopher Bunton January 26, 2013 at 2:11 AM Thank You! :)

Debbie Guzzi January 22, 2013 at 2:42 PM Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love Christopher Bunton January 23, 2013 at 3:58 PM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2013 at 4:46 PM wow, this is intense and BIG congrats on your win. I love to read tail end rhymes. I will go see one more. Christopher Bunton January 23, 2013 at 3:58 PM Thank you!

Yanny Widjanarko January 21, 2013 at 8:18 AM Great poem, congrats on your win Christ :) Christopher Bunton January 21, 2013 at 3:24 PM Thank You!!

Kim Merryman January 20, 2013 at 7:57 PM I like this, Christopher! (not what's happening but how you wrote about it, lol) Good job! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Christopher Bunton January 21, 2013 at 3:24 PM Thank you!!

Sharon Smith January 20, 2013 at 2:30 PM Why does the story of the Tower of Babel come to mind? Congratulations on your win! Christopher Bunton January 21, 2013 at 3:23 PM Thank You! :) The tower is a picture of whats happening.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 20, 2013 at 11:16 AM Congratulations on your winning spot Christopher xx Christopher Bunton January 20, 2013 at 12:19 PM Thank You!

Victoria Anderson-Throop January 20, 2013 at 3:54 AM Enemies quickly taken. great line.... Christopher Bunton January 20, 2013 at 12:19 PM Thank you! :)

Lori Lucas Mcclure January 19, 2013 at 10:03 AM Words of profound reason and clarity! I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Lori Christopher Bunton January 19, 2013 at 2:55 PM Thank You! :)