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Liberties Slowly Taken

Liberties slowly taken, "We The People" forsaken, From our "Leaders" nothing is said. The economy crashes. Propaganda T.V. flashes. Jobs along with answers have fled. New World Order completed. Freedom and Saints defeated. Faith of many shaken. Deaths long cold rattling groan. An ancient evil on the throne. Enemies quickly taken. For the "Taken" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/11/2013 7:30:00 AM
We are complacent and gradually more and more is taken. If we are not careful there will be nothing of value left to take. Well written. You are good at this form.
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/15/2013 8:57:00 PM
Very true. Thank you!
Date: 1/25/2013 7:08:00 PM
Christopher, congratulations with your amazing win.. xox~PD
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/26/2013 2:11:00 AM
Thank You! :)
Date: 1/22/2013 2:42:00 PM
Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/23/2013 3:58:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/21/2013 4:46:00 PM
wow, this is intense and BIG congrats on your win. I love to read tail end rhymes. I will go see one more.
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/23/2013 3:58:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/21/2013 8:18:00 AM
Great poem, congrats on your win Christ :)
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/21/2013 3:24:00 PM
Thank You!!
Date: 1/20/2013 7:57:00 PM
I like this, Christopher! (not what's happening but how you wrote about it, lol) Good job! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/21/2013 3:24:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 1/20/2013 2:30:00 PM
Why does the story of the Tower of Babel come to mind? Congratulations on your win!
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/21/2013 3:23:00 PM
Thank You! :) The tower is a picture of whats happening.
Date: 1/20/2013 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Christopher xx
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/20/2013 12:19:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 1/20/2013 3:54:00 AM
Enemies quickly taken. great line....
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/20/2013 12:19:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 1/19/2013 10:03:00 AM
Words of profound reason and clarity! I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Lori
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/19/2013 2:55:00 PM
Thank You! :)