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Liberate Me

I SAY LIBERATE ME!
free me from a
bondage known all
too well
free me from those
chain-links felt way
too much
free me from a world
that's so out of
touch,even though it
manages to stay in
touch
free me from those
dungeons and allow
me to roam
roam like this
signal on my phone
that's holding me in
captivity with fees
I SAY LIBERATE ME!
liberate me from the
wonderful big
brother who looks
over each and every
one of us
the same big brother
that captures us
rebelling against
the stoplight and
before we can get
down the street and
around the corner
our tag is
photographed,
placing us in line
to receive notice
that a fine has to
be paid,cash,credit,
or debit; however
they can get it
PLEASE BRING ON THE
LIBERATION!
liberation from the
debt that's been
kept on the books
every since I
completed that
credit application,
at the time not
knowing that I was
applying
high-interest rates
to my budget, which
is no longer a
budget but a conduit
for companies having
fun extracting funds
from a paycheck
that's already
heartbreaking to
look at
Liberate me from the
from the
fines,fees,interest-rates,stoplights,nightlights,
the debt acquired
through a
misunderstanding of
APR policies, from
the policies
themselves imposed
by the powers that
be
I say,liberate me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/5/2016 10:22:00 PM
Lawrence Brannen, nice to see this powerful poem again. linda
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Date: 8/21/2015 9:57:00 AM
enjoying this poem once again
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:50:00 PM
Lawrence,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/5/2014 6:26:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Lawrence. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/2/2014 2:05:00 AM
Hi Lawrence, congratulations on a great write - I really enjoyed reading this poem! Well done!
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Date: 7/1/2014 11:15:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 7/1/2014 7:04:00 AM
deep write..WARM WELCOME TO POETRYSOUP!!! I have been here bout two years now and I really am having fun and lots of learning here more than poetry itself but life.. :D i hope you will enjoy it here as I do.. :) God bless you >> :)olive eloisa
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Date: 7/1/2014 4:20:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lawrence :) - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/30/2014 10:18:00 PM
Lawrence,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/30/2014 4:59:00 PM
Yep wish I could, them things are hard to avoid! Hey just a side note, since I have been having similar problems, you might be able to go into "My Poems" and edit and fix the spacing on your poem, seems to be a glitch lately. Enjoyed reading it. :)
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