Komal Walimbe Poet Free verse

Liars

When you talk to me
My ears acts like sieve
My eyes know it all
My face can't stop smirking 
Cause even your lies 
Can't deceive me this time
I might be innocent back then
Letting me dance on your fingertips 
But trust me
I have become way smarter than I was

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Paula Goldsmith February 3, 2023 at 11:30 AM A wonderful write and ending. I just had this happen to me, my a so call good friend. So sad and it hurts. I wrote a few poem about this. A have wonderful day.............. Komal Walimbe February 3, 2023 at 8:57 PM Guess, true friends are really uncommon. Well sad it happened with you as well, we cant really trust anyone! Glad you stopped by! Have a great day :)

Heidi Sands January 21, 2023 at 12:05 PM Excellent. Wise and strong :) Komal Walimbe January 21, 2023 at 9:47 PM Thank you! Glad you liked it...Hope you are doing great! :)

Marco Chies December 21, 2022 at 2:58 PM how accurate can the mind be... pretend to believe and analyze the liar... you did very well, komal, very well indeed! I loved it! Komal Walimbe December 22, 2022 at 3:32 AM Thank you so much Marco! So glad you liked it...Have a great day and thank you for stopping by! :)

Stephan McBride December 20, 2022 at 1:03 PM They better watch out no fooling you, : ) Komal Walimbe December 20, 2022 at 11:50 PM Haha... I just poured out whatever was in my head that time... :)

Clifford Villalon December 19, 2022 at 3:53 PM This poem is cute! Komal Walimbe December 19, 2022 at 9:38 PM Thank you for stopping by! Have a great day!:-)