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Late-night perfumes waft and swirl, circling me like the petals and pearls that drape upon my shoulders. Ephemeral, their scents transpose, one by one by one, then fade like the sweet taste of kisses. I look up and I see the Moon, the Moon, the Moon tonight, the Moon far up tonight, far up in this dark sky … the Moon! She’s there, silently watching while playing her tricks; seeming further away by the minute; coyly performing a slow retreat. But her face is cold and I begin to freeze as I surrender to her charade. High and aloof and bright and cold, far off in the distance, the Moon plays her endless game with my heart. AP: Honorable Mention 2023 Posted on October 3, 2023

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Date: 1/7/2024 7:08:00 PM
A unique poem. I like it. It makes me feel that there are two magicians; the moon and someone else. ??
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/8/2024 7:01:00 AM
good catch ~ thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Hilda.
Date: 11/18/2023 1:38:00 AM
Hard to resist that gravitational pull. Atmospheric. Beautiful.
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Date: 11/20/2023 6:21:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Jean ~
Date: 10/5/2023 9:20:00 PM
A taut poem, Line. Reads brilliantly. Plays with the emotions. Superior stuff! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/11/2023 6:56:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gershon. Most appreciated ~
Date: 10/5/2023 1:24:00 PM
the moon that is very flirtatious She is well aware of the seduction she exerts between lovers and poets,,, so she plays her charms as she swings in the sky... found a great poet In her mis en scene, she exaggerates... but, no! but its only charm... congrats dear Line, salute, alkas
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Date: 10/11/2023 6:56:00 AM
Most appreciated, thank you, Alkas ~ have a lovely day
Date: 10/3/2023 4:30:00 PM
OH!!! I like this Lin, A moonlight FAVE and a Bostonian "WICKED AWESOME"
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Date: 10/11/2023 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, John ~ most appreciated
Date: 10/3/2023 2:35:00 PM
Line - so beautiful and very impressed with your reading.. You must do more it enhances the whole poetic experience. Fave x
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Date: 10/11/2023 6:55:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, Sam ~
Date: 10/3/2023 12:13:00 PM
Bad moon! Good poem though
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Date: 10/11/2023 6:55:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom ~

Book: Shattered Sighs