Liam's Eyes

I wish you could see them
I’ll have to paint a picture;
They are the eyes of Liam,
Like the ocean, only richer. 

There is more than depth 
There is more than color
For you see his eyes
Are like no other.

They are so captivating
So invigorating
That they pull me under
Robbing my breath,
Softening the thunder,
And silencing the rest.

Stunningly misty,
Dangerously sheik,
Undoubtedly sexy
Leaving me humbled and weak.

They put me in a trance
The world around me stops,
As it will take but one glance
For that bubble I’m in to pop.

So here I am drowning
What a peaceful way to die,
With beautiful silence pounding,
As I’m trapped in Liam’s eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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June 25, 2016 at 11:01 PM
CAITLIN, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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May 30, 2011 at 12:07 PM
Riveting. Just love it . Nicely written poem
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