Levity of Time

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There is non-stop worship in heaven but for this moment. Yesterday, many in my area reported this storm incident.

thirty minutes of blueberry hail ~ silence in heaven for half hour

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Paige Hind

Date: 3/14/2025 5:35:00 PM

Quite the image! Love your use of language! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2025 5:36:00 PM

I know I’ve said it before, thank you so much for your encouragement! Hugs ~ Kim

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/14/2025 11:02:00 AM

I heard about the various storms all over your country. Millions may be at risk.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2025 11:23:00 AM

Lord, keep us safe!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/14/2025 11:00:00 AM

Oh, where one's mind might go! I know I have an active and playful imagination which seems to be how you came to write this. My son and I both laughed - thank you for that. Being off the wall can be such fun. I love your picture, Kim. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/14/2025 1:01:00 PM

That's okay, Heaven missed it, too.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2025 11:24:00 AM

LOL! My sis said hail, the size of blueberries fell for 30 minutes at her house. I was only 10 minutes away and missed out on that one. xx, Cay and sis!!