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Which reminds me as I stare At your face so stern Did I tell you how I saw Your mistake, why don't I learn? The way you talked and laughed The way she whispered close Did you forget I was there? Did I become a ghost? No big deal, oh really? That's just the way you mingle! Then why are we together Might as well be single. So now from my point of view Let's look at it from there You on the other end Not funny, do I dare? Stop and think a minute How you'd really feel? If you were wearing my shoes It's much a bigger deal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/25/2011 4:24:00 AM
Congrats Kristen on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:32:00 PM
Hi Kristen - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:19:00 PM
Congrats, Kristen. Nice going. Enjoyed. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:07:00 PM
Congrats Kristen on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry... u sure made the point with your awesome lines... enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, kristen
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:22:00 AM
Hi Kristi, Congratulations on your win in the "What's the Point?" Contest. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kristen in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/20/2011 9:20:00 PM
Good wording and rhyming in this piece. One small suggestion: it would be a good idea if you presented the last line in your last verse as "It's a much bigger deal".
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Date: 1/15/2011 9:35:00 PM
Cool and interesting write Kristen.. the levels don't always seem parallel in any relationship.. we just keep trying.. nice perspective on this one luv.. good luck with your first contest which I just entered.. if u need any help just ask the "Sweetheart" ..be glad to help u out if need be ...happy weekend..
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