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Letting Stars Sparkle

Stars shift throughout a weary night puzzled imperfections again highlighted by flowing thoughts drowning below bridges broken with words misspoken Dreams drift to distant destinations where trouble's travels are restricted lost along with an old black tourister and those daily mundane affairs Spirits lift with another Antiguan smile distilling demons to the way side creating a slanted image of the sky letting stars sparkle in clouded eyes Sunrise gifts garner respectful homage carrying penetrating rays of hope in tow where a fleeting soul remains holding on to the last threads of a leaving heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/8/2016 12:04:00 AM
Excellent. Thought provoking write. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/7/2016 5:17:00 PM
Sounds like a heavy night, Tim. Let it go:) Hoping you are well.
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Date: 12/7/2016 2:42:00 PM
Oh that last stanza stirs so much emotion...A leaving heart..brings only heartache...So heartwrenchingly sad...yet always with a sunshine ray of hope..Awesome.
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Date: 12/7/2016 1:14:00 PM
enjoyable read. thanks for sharing.
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Date: 12/7/2016 1:09:00 PM
Wow Tim, very nice. I like how you wrote the ending of this.
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Date: 12/7/2016 12:54:00 PM
lovely classic poem is how I would describe this poem , painting a picture. Im on a Caribbean beach as the sun rises stephen
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Date: 12/7/2016 12:37:00 PM
This was beautiful and so well written Tim. The third stanza really grabbed me. Nicely done.
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