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Letting Off Steam

my eyes stuck inside

the sun reminds me to breathe —

release of pressure

parallel to instant pot

each morning bright with prospects

4/27/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

April 29, 2020 at 6:40 AM

The last line gives me hope; optimism is alive and well at your house my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

April 29, 2020 at 7:16 AM

Sending you a hug! We keep breathing and hope this will be over soon :)

Gershon Wolf

April 27, 2020 at 6:24 PM

Resonant and resonates, esp. these days. All three of my thumbs up for this tanka! ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

April 27, 2020 at 7:41 PM

Thanks so much! Means a lot!

Rico Leffanta

April 27, 2020 at 1:38 PM

And then the clowns appear ....Aloha! Rico

Kim Rodrigues

April 27, 2020 at 4:53 PM

LOL...too funny!

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 27, 2020 at 8:38 AM

Wonderfully said dearest , Kim " each morning bright with prospects" God provides the prospects Man has to turn them into actualities otherwise God's gift is wasted! Take good care my friend. Hugs xxx and blessings.

Kim Rodrigues

April 27, 2020 at 9:15 AM

Let us revel in those prospects! Thank you, dearest Demetrios!