Letting Go

Little did I know when I was but a child
Ephemeral is life; and all the dreams I’d filed
Through my youth inside my mind would not
Turn out to ever be what I’d once sought.
Instead of shining white, my knight wore black.
Nonetheless, I followed my life’s track,
Going forward mostly happily;

Getting disappointed too, for I’d be
Often wondering what became of me.

Such dreams of fancy used to fill my head!
But then reality I came to know!
Some dreams of mine came true, while others fled
because - at last - I simply let them go.

golden years beckon
as poetry consumes me. . .
my vanished daydreams


Written April 6, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Walker Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Worded so well and the three styles of poetry flowed together easily becoming one.
Davey Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Congrats Andrea on another top spot in this contest! You are such a wonderful writer, and have so much talent that it's almost unbelievable!
A   Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "Letting Go win." XOX ~LINDA~
Williams Gault Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 6:49 PM
You convey such genuine thoughts and feelings so well, the reader can easily relate. The poetic forms flow together seamlessly. Wonderful expression, congratulations!
Devnath  Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Congrats on your great win. Loved always, bl
Sefunmi Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Congrats on your top placement with this poem!
Leiser Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Very nicely written, Andrea, and congrats on your top win :)
Raina Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 1:38 PM
All three forms nicely done....Congratulations on your top placement !!
Scars Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Andrea, congrats on your top placement and for being in my contest! :)-luloo
Chircop Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 4:38 PM
oh those fancy daydreams. ..I wish they were eternal.I love the first two lines so much cuz I can relate too...When we are little... we think that life will take so long to pass, but gee years pass by so quick, and of some dreams We all let got... Love love your poem.. as I can so relate to it.
Kendrick Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Vanished dreams sometimes are very difficult..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..The three styles of poem forms chosen is interesting..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 11, 2016 at 8:43 AM
I think you did great Andrea. I need alone time to come up with something for this one. ; )
Muideen Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Great poem.......A.M.
Devnath  Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Excellent poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest with 7. Loved always, bl
Inman Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:35 AM
Beautifully written Andrea. Your words hold a lot of meaning for me. Sorry I haven't visited lately. I haven't been reading anything, or writing either. No need to waste your time with me right now.
May Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:12 AM
Great write Andrea....best wishes
Daniel Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 9:23 AM
This is so beautifully written. The thought just flows on continuously to the other forms:) love it. A 7:)
Muideen Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:21 AM
This is a wonderful and brilliant post. Poetry drives me also towards my dream. Thanks for sharing....much bless.........A.M.
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 3:01 AM
The forms flow so beautifully from one to the next - I hope to still be writing poems in my golden years too and we can live out our dreams through our words:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Davey Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 1:07 AM
You really do have an amazing way with words and adding depth and meaning to it all! Well done and gl in the contest
Hicks Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 10:52 PM
Grasp to what you can accomplish, let go the ones that no longer hold meaning ... I like your sentiments in this poem. Well penned. I really like Laura's Loo format here ... it really seems to flow, and it's quite unique.
Gazbowski Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 10:36 PM
An excellent collection, thoroughly enjoyed the read Andrea.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 10:22 PM
An excellent entry in Laura Loo's contest... well structured with fine phrasing and sentiment. Good luck from me!! Best wishes, Keith
Anish Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 9:07 PM
Our golden years are coming! Yet we will make it if we stick to our verse! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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