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Letting Go

Little did I know when I was but a child Ephemeral is life; and all the dreams I’d filed Through my youth inside my mind would not Turn out to ever be what I’d once sought. Instead of shining white, my knight wore black. Nonetheless, I followed my life’s track, Going forward mostly happily; Getting disappointed too, for I’d be Often wondering what became of me. Such dreams of fancy used to fill my head! But then reality I came to know! Some dreams of mine came true, while others fled because - at last - I simply let them go. golden years beckon as poetry consumes me. . . my vanished daydreams Written April 6, 2016

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Date: 4/17/2016 7:48:00 AM
Worded so well and the three styles of poetry flowed together easily becoming one.
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Date: 4/13/2016 11:17:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on another top spot in this contest! You are such a wonderful writer, and have so much talent that it's almost unbelievable!
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Date: 4/13/2016 9:33:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your "Letting Go win." XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/13/2016 6:49:00 PM
You convey such genuine thoughts and feelings so well, the reader can easily relate. The poetic forms flow together seamlessly. Wonderful expression, congratulations!
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Date: 4/13/2016 5:58:00 PM
Congrats on your great win. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/13/2016 5:24:00 PM
Congrats on your top placement with this poem!
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Date: 4/13/2016 3:34:00 PM
Very nicely written, Andrea, and congrats on your top win :)
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Date: 4/13/2016 1:38:00 PM
All three forms nicely done....Congratulations on your top placement !!
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Date: 4/13/2016 1:19:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your top placement and for being in my contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 4/11/2016 4:38:00 PM
oh those fancy daydreams. ..I wish they were eternal.I love the first two lines so much cuz I can relate too...When we are little... we think that life will take so long to pass, but gee years pass by so quick, and of some dreams We all let got... Love love your poem.. as I can so relate to it.
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Date: 4/11/2016 3:24:00 PM
Vanished dreams sometimes are very difficult..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..The three styles of poem forms chosen is interesting..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/11/2016 8:43:00 AM
I think you did great Andrea. I need alone time to come up with something for this one. ; )
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Date: 4/10/2016 3:03:00 PM
Great poem.......A.M.
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Date: 4/10/2016 11:46:00 AM
Excellent poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest with 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/10/2016 11:35:00 AM
Beautifully written Andrea. Your words hold a lot of meaning for me. Sorry I haven't visited lately. I haven't been reading anything, or writing either. No need to waste your time with me right now.
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Date: 4/10/2016 11:12:00 AM
Great write Andrea....best wishes
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Date: 4/10/2016 9:23:00 AM
This is so beautifully written. The thought just flows on continuously to the other forms:) love it. A 7:)
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Date: 4/10/2016 8:21:00 AM
This is a wonderful and brilliant post. Poetry drives me also towards my dream. Thanks for sharing....much bless.........A.M.
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Date: 4/10/2016 3:01:00 AM
The forms flow so beautifully from one to the next - I hope to still be writing poems in my golden years too and we can live out our dreams through our words:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/10/2016 1:07:00 AM
You really do have an amazing way with words and adding depth and meaning to it all! Well done and gl in the contest
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Date: 4/9/2016 10:52:00 PM
Grasp to what you can accomplish, let go the ones that no longer hold meaning ... I like your sentiments in this poem. Well penned. I really like Laura's Loo format here ... it really seems to flow, and it's quite unique.
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Date: 4/9/2016 10:36:00 PM
An excellent collection, thoroughly enjoyed the read Andrea.
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Date: 4/9/2016 10:22:00 PM
An excellent entry in Laura Loo's contest... well structured with fine phrasing and sentiment. Good luck from me!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/9/2016 9:07:00 PM
Our golden years are coming! Yet we will make it if we stick to our verse! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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