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Letting Go

Like a master of self-deception Earnest beliefs and conviction Throw’s woven rows potter’s dust rose Tears flow my sorrow grows Intentions to impose judgments No more love with disappointments Grudges need to be relinquished Gateway to reality arose extinguished Old dreams new ones replenished Heavy fray rope no longer enslaves me in bondage Cool breeze freely moving cloaking my cheeks at long last Falling no longer , but am the person I acknowledge Satisfying heart, no longer an echo of the past bleeding scars untold relinquished emerald green letting go h-e-a-l-i-n-g 4/8/2016
- Poetry Contest : Letting Go-Three Form Style Sponsored by: Laura Loo
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Raynes Avatar
February 21, 2018 at 7:19 PM
i like this one Eve, the best way to heal, you're so spot on, such a beautiful read.
Vincent Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 1:52 PM
What a great reading it has been, Eve... I have really enjoyed reading this
Neels Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 1:03 PM
Love your gem Eve ;) congratulations on your win in the contest as well!
A   Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 9:35 PM
Eve, Congratulations on your "Letting Go win." XOX ~LINDA~
Roper Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:13 PM
Thank you so very much, sweet girl, for the congratulations and inspirational encouraging me.Hugs Eve
Devnath  Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 6:08 PM
Beautiful win with beautiful poem. A great congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Roper Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Thank you so very much, BL, for the congratulations. It always feels so nourished when people like you genuinely gives me a complement. I Thank You again. Hugs Eve
Leiser Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve :)
Roper Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:12 PM
Thank you so very much, Laura, for the congratulations.Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 1:25 PM
Eve, beautiful... congrats on your top placement and for being in my contest! :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:10 PM
Thank you so very much, Laura Loo, for the congratulations and placing me in your contest I am always honored. It always feels so nourished when people like you genuinely gives me a complement. I Thank You again. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 8:21 PM
The forms flow so beautifully together Eve - I think we all have bonds that bind us whether family or illness but we can over come our difficulties:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Thank you, some bonds are better forgotten. I for one have a few skeletons in the closet that wish they would disappear :'(
Christian-Bowling Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Just a Beautiful poem right here.. really could relate to it as if it was speaking to me Great job well done!!!-Love Ettie
Roper Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so very much, Ettie , for the complement .Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 5:44 PM
i am amazed at the flow and quality of this wonderful melody, eve... still doing a draft for this one... but you nailed it!..huggs
Roper Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 6:00 PM
Nette, I truly enjoy your visits thank you so much for your inspiring complement. I'm really trying to learn. Hugs sweet friend
La France Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Eve, this is truly beautiful, I am loving the layout, a winner for me, 7 +++
Roper Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 4:24 PM
Thank you! :-) :-)
Gupta Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 12:38 AM
So rich a verse that a second and third read are needed to access the very rich content as well. A beautiful ' Letting Go'...
Roper Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Thank you so very much, Probir!!!! Hugs Eve
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