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9/17/2024 for Cessation Poetry Contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker

Letting Go

In life, sometimes, I must engage the clutch -
I step on the gas, navigate, and drive.
At other times, that doesn't help too much,
I ease off, coasting freely to survive. 

In younger years, I'd grab onto the reins -
start a family, pursue a career.
Now that I am retired with aches and pains,
my kid is independent, not so near.
 
As life brings changes I must undergo,
I find it's better to stop and let go.
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Miller Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 7:19 AM
This is great and oh so true, congratulations
Crandall Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 10:21 AM
Thank you Terry!
Radice Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 8:10 AM
If you're anything like me David you're probably wondering how the heck you found the time to do the things you did while working. Yes, aches and pains rear their ugly heads now and again but, what the heck, there are times I feel like I'm growing down. I hope you do to. Imagination plays a big part in that as does poetry. I sense in your poem that this may be the same for you. Nice write. Cheers - Gary
Crandall Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 8:48 AM
Hi Gary. Yep, I can definitely relate to wonder how I found that time when working. Other people had told me that they had that same experience, so I'm not totally surprised. Interesting expression, growing down - man, I love not working!
Fowler Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 1:17 PM
Love the analogy Dave. :)
Crandall Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 2:37 PM
Thanke elle
Canerdy Avatar
September 18, 2024 at 8:20 PM
Logical, wise words, David. Janice
Greenhough Avatar
September 17, 2024 at 9:07 PM
I feel that this is a wonderful entry for the contest. Good luck.
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