Letting Go

Letting Go


There were doubts,yes there were fears,
There were bouts of hurt and  tears.
You weren't mere a passing cloud
You were more than a  blessing rain.
Rainbows are mischievous,so were you
Rare colors! I thought; but dubious were you.
Letting go is not easy for me love
Not easy  to behold this pain and leave.
Away you fly ,your  mean shadow trail behind 
In search of new green meadows ,leaving me blind.
Now that I ponder,my thoughts make me wonder
Wow!did we have a love that would surrender??
Or were we mere carnal hues of lavender
Born to be tender ,but withered at a mere thunder?
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Agustin Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.
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