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Letting Go

I lived there, listening In the turmoil of the trailer park For many years, through tears Time passed by as I watched people Move in and out, in and out Never staying there for too long I wonder where they’ve all gone The moments ticked on, moving Across second hands, along the lines Of goodbyes and lost ties that leave The heart feeling like it has a gap Where the blood might leak out I drifted to sleep at night After whispering prayers Huddled behind my quiet peace There was a silent scream Echoing through my soul without control Not once did I dream Of the laughter Laughter that Would come when I let go of the past
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Delaney Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 6:00 AM
You really captured the mood of sadness for lost friends. Congratulations and good luck. SuZ
Canerdy Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 5:58 AM
Deeply moving and descriptive of longing for joy, then finding it. A BIG congrats on your win. Janice
Seeker Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 7:12 AM
Superb write as always, Regina!
Raiser Avatar
March 1, 2021 at 6:51 AM
Very touching, I enjoyed this poem.
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