Tim B Poet Rhyme

Letters To God

Wrought with frustration, torn apart again;
Cut me to the bone and wrench control from
Dark and twisted corners of vile, part gin,
Wrote you this letter, born part of a sum.

I'll slice and whittle, and dance away in
Somber solitude and cry foul of them;
Those that cut me down to size with wry sin,
Whistling tunes that do belittle some men.

Why do you torment me? I bled then;
Bleed for me now, you must be numb
I am your savior and I'll help when;
When you see me in your heart's long dark end.

Write your letter with love dear...

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Poet Destroyer A October 23, 2011 at 12:04 PM i like the poem TOM,, very much,, i kind of feel God reaching out to me at times... but, i'm stubborn and ignorant... can't help it... but, i have written letters to GOD... some how they always end up as questions and poems... And one of them.. is your question of "TORMENT".. I'm gonna favorite this poem,, it means more than you know... take care,...p.d. Tim B October 23, 2011 at 5:16 PM Glad it means something to you and that you like it P.D., take care friend.

Elizabeth Wesley October 22, 2011 at 11:02 PM Deep and dark feelings that reach out and touch the reader.

Nancy Jones October 22, 2011 at 8:26 PM Dear God. Sure wish you weren't a boy. That kinda screws it up for me. Written with love~N ps. Please don't think that this means I want you to be a girl. It doesn't mean that at all. Tim B October 22, 2011 at 9:00 PM Ahh, always looking for letters. They just never seem to add up!? :) Nancy Jones October 22, 2011 at 8:54 PM yes indeedy, loved the po!! thought you were soliciting letters ;) namaste~N Tim B October 22, 2011 at 8:52 PM Mrs Nancy, are you making assumptions about God? :) Still, I am sure the letters are all appreciated. Did you like the poem?