Samar Saleh Poet Pantoum

Letters From the Ocean

For as the sun drowns in the misty waves
I coat my dreams with the filthy shade
And gently some drops of ocean tickled 
Whispering my thoughts in a stormy tune
I coat my dreams with the filthy shade
Jiggling my soul with a wetted hope
Whispering my thoughts in a stormy tune
Drifted through my veins as I went on asleep
Jiggling my soul with a wetted hope
To believe in a rise of a holy sun
Drifted through my veins as I went on asleep
That abides to arise with daily new notes
To believe in a rise of a holy sun
And gently some drops of ocean tickled 
That abides to arise with daily new notes
For as the sun drowns in the misty waves

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Carolyn Devonshire July 12, 2011 at 11:40 AM This is such a lovely poem filled with creative imagery, Samar. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 12, 2011 at 5:19 AM Congrats Samar on your wonderful win with this dazzling assignment ..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown July 12, 2011 at 5:14 AM Congratulations Samar on your win in the "Assignment" contest of P.D. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta July 12, 2011 at 4:18 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Samar

Poet Destroyer A July 12, 2011 at 12:41 AM Samar,,Congratulations on a poem well done! Thank you for supporting my contest~ I sure enjoyed every entry,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2011 at 8:50 PM I sure enjoy pantoum poetry, Samar.This was very nice to read.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 17, 2011 at 5:50 PM Very deep and meaningful expressions, samar,