Letter To X Girlfriend

In a twinkling of an eye
The hearts melted, in my eyes sparked your beauty
Never could a breath be held
So strong was my love for you

Very nice moments we cherished
Night seemed morning
No dark could overcome the light of your beauty

With the birth of years
Like the withering of the flower
Our love faded, the bond broke
Never again in the field

Time had to reveal, same could actions do
Bright gold is your face
Your heart the hurting stone
Never again in the field, the field of love !!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 1, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Hi Kuleza, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Lembi Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 6:27 PM
Thank you very much.. i appreciate my dear...
A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Kuleza, thank you for the wonderful reply to my comment
Lembi Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:58 AM
you are welcome my dear
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January 25, 2016 at 8:44 PM
Kuleza,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT**
Lembi Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 5:58 AM
I thank you SKAT for nicely receiving me, I really appreciate. I am a Malawian by nationality,, I have been writing poems for sometime but i never had a chance to show them to others and i take poetry soup as my best opportunity to do so...I sincerely thank you for being a friend and i hope our friendship will lead us to something best. would you please tell me a little about yourself too if possible once again thanks for being a friend
White Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Love hurts. Nicely done. A gentlemans' goodbye. Kuleza
Lembi Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 5:59 AM
Thank you very much for your positive comment ... I appreciate
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January 25, 2016 at 7:53 PM
kULEZA WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Lembi Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 6:01 AM
Thank you very much for receiving LINDA. hope to give you more of my poems. proud of you. thanks for being a friend
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