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Letter To X Girlfriend

In a twinkling of an eye The hearts melted, in my eyes sparked your beauty Never could a breath be held So strong was my love for you Very nice moments we cherished Night seemed morning No dark could overcome the light of your beauty With the birth of years Like the withering of the flower Our love faded, the bond broke Never again in the field Time had to reveal, same could actions do Bright gold is your face Your heart the hurting stone Never again in the field, the field of love !!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/1/2016 5:58:00 PM
Hi Kuleza, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Kuleza John Lembi
Date: 2/1/2016 6:27:00 PM
Thank you very much.. i appreciate my dear...
Date: 1/26/2016 6:57:00 AM
Kuleza, thank you for the wonderful reply to my comment
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Kuleza John Lembi
Date: 1/26/2016 9:58:00 AM
you are welcome my dear
Date: 1/25/2016 8:44:00 PM
Kuleza,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT**
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Kuleza John Lembi
Date: 1/26/2016 5:58:00 AM
I thank you SKAT for nicely receiving me, I really appreciate. I am a Malawian by nationality,, I have been writing poems for sometime but i never had a chance to show them to others and i take poetry soup as my best opportunity to do so...I sincerely thank you for being a friend and i hope our friendship will lead us to something best. would you please tell me a little about yourself too if possible once again thanks for being a friend
Date: 1/25/2016 8:29:00 PM
Love hurts. Nicely done. A gentlemans' goodbye. Kuleza
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Kuleza John Lembi
Date: 1/26/2016 5:59:00 AM
Thank you very much for your positive comment ... I appreciate
Date: 1/25/2016 7:53:00 PM
kULEZA WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Kuleza John Lembi
Date: 1/26/2016 6:01:00 AM
Thank you very much for receiving LINDA. hope to give you more of my poems. proud of you. thanks for being a friend

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