Letter To the King Part Two

I feel like the door is close.
Lord what happen to the people I was close?
I feel empty and time just froze.
I wanna get falls creek high, can you give me a double doze?
Could you give me a new life, heart,and brain?
Yeah a couple of those.
Because they know me really well, well my foes..
Can you fill my life's empty wholes?
Every time I stare at the mirrors it shows.
I swear I will fall in hell if the wind blows.
I never been this low.
Never been this cold.
I'm kinda worried about who has my soul.
I wonder if I could trade it for gold.
Any buyers???
So my life can be sold-Mario Perez
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 5, 2011 at 9:51 PM
Once again I can relate to your feelings and probably what happen in your life as you were writing this poem. You have really inspired me so far with your words and meaningful poems. I can say that I feel like I have been in your shoes.
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