Letter To The Editor



             Your judgments have me grinning.
Don't pretend you were immune 
from the Avarice of Pride.

Which you delved past cover packet 
into the gutworm of stardoms naked lunch?

Unfolding the artwork of your Deathsnake Bands- ministering to idol hands, 
wandering the scent of artwork sleeve.
'Scent of new jacket 
with walking around money in the pockets 
made of 'feited hourglass sand.

Do you not find it pathetic and ugly, 
to keep chanting me me me?

I like how they are stringed pearls of sos-, 
smokerings, 
death row-, 
'peals of that Apple 
"standing up to be counted with pi 
and to give account" 
as a bridge to understanding your insanity 
and to give creedence to your selfish lies 
of phi, 
relational patterns of why is the sky...
-
Maggots of your own carrion luggage 
left to fester to the Son.

Sacrificial Poseidon Aquariums, 
Babylon Hanging Gardens, 
Bloodsport of perceived insects in arena of jar, of Leviathan Media Priests and Running-man television, 
(Black) arts.

Did you invent the term movie star?
(Vanity Smurf tearer), 
take a look as reality draws nearer.

Symbiose of the mind's chemical- sea trench monsters.

Rally the sheeples to stampede by your musical serenadings, 
box spring snakes coiled 
in union of souls call of tune.

Do you court the Druids to "tie a yellow ribbon round the old Oak Tree..."

Such Romanticide, needy.

(Your True : CHORUS)
A falling star hung in the air by insindiary glare 
legislating from your bench
like Hephaestus tears
tinkering above a lossless accomodater
puppeting to speak your own truth
while pride sets up another soothsayer booth

Lucy, you got kisses for five cents,
while the world is monopoly 
burning your marketplace incense, 
falling for the fallen to pay for incoming recompense.

So, Nephilim pretending to be our Creators 
is your next one, huh.

Soon, the World will see, your sumptuous gush 
of trans-humanity
is just mental masturbation 
fantasy 
escaping the real thing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/10/2024 10:44:00 AM
You are very creative in your writing.. nicely done Jude..I see you are getting a little fan base..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/10/2024 8:52:00 AM
Woah, this poem is a whole dark ride, which takes the reader to the world of those narcissists who showcase negligence towards every other person and have such high opinions about themselves..There's sarcasm and layers of truths in this write, with clever word -combinations and soul stirrings reflections which really compel the readers to dive in deep thoughts..I love that mythology reference too here "Sacrificial Poseidon Aquariums","Did you invent the term movie star?"Gosh, incredible this is
Login to Reply
Herrick Avatar
Jude Herrick
Date: 1/10/2024 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, Hiya.
Sharma  Avatar
Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/10/2024 8:53:00 AM
A deep and introspective read it was.. Sending my best wishes ~
Date: 1/10/2024 2:40:00 AM
I love how you’ve included a touch of mythology in this lyrical poem that flows in such strength and eloquence, some narcissistic individuals too remind me that they feel like they are the best. And this poem made me think of that and beyond. So much conveyed in such a soul hitting manner . I love the way you started the poem especially and also “ 'Scent of new jacket with walking around money in the pockets made of 'feited hourglass sand.“ deep! Profound reality in so many places! Your way
Login to Reply
Empress Avatar
Ink Empress
Date: 1/10/2024 2:40:00 AM
Of pairing words is so clever and creative! Its an absolute pleasure reading your work! Sending you light always
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter