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Letter To Heaven

Get yourself pick up find a pen And so then begin to write an open letter Place it inside a bottle Earmarked for heaven Then send it lovingly floating on its way In the hope of expectedly Heaven will one day somehow R.S.V.P With a personal invitation in tow From God himself wanting you to know He has personally saved and is keeping warm a V.I.P space beside him especially just for you Because he loves you so And this is your final reward in recognition Of what he defines as a good selfless life spent in servitude actually really means and amounts to Rather than just idly following what you are told What is right but quite patently is not in fact is wrong Bye the so called human keepers of the faith Who present themselves as the key holders and gatekeeper's of heaven

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Date: 2/16/2023 2:56:00 PM
You hit upon a great point here Christopher, people believing they are the gatekeepers and key holders to heaven, if indeed there is such a place, we must find our own way there, bearing in mind its a lot easier to stumble into a living hell, if you get my drift, which I’m sure you do, cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 3/8/2023 2:43:00 PM
Cheer's To true David

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