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Letter To Heaven

Get yourself pick up find a pen

And so then begin to write an open
letter

Place it inside a bottle 

Earmarked for heaven 

Then send it lovingly floating on its way

In the hope of expectedly 

Heaven will one day somehow R.S.V.P

With a personal invitation in tow

From God himself wanting you to know

He has personally saved and is keeping
warm a V.I.P space beside him especially
just for you

Because he loves you so

And this is your final reward in 
recognition

Of what he defines as a good selfless 
life spent in servitude actually really
means and amounts to

Rather than just idly following what
you are told

What is right but quite patently is not
in fact is wrong

Bye the so called human keepers of
the faith

Who present themselves as the key
holders and gatekeeper's of heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 2/16/2023 2:56:00 PM
You hit upon a great point here Christopher, people believing they are the gatekeepers and key holders to heaven, if indeed there is such a place, we must find our own way there, bearing in mind its a lot easier to stumble into a living hell, if you get my drift, which I’m sure you do, cheers David
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 3/8/2023 2:43:00 PM
Cheer's To true David

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