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Oh, brother did you see a mother's tears? Did you hear a child's scream? Or are you also as they are, blind and deaf for human cries? Do you not see the dark, now that you live in light? Have you forgoten who you are, have you forsaken now your past? And what of your mother, since years, ill and weak? What of your father, now old and meek? Oh, brother do you know, I am now leaving home. To fight in the war for this is now the law. If you still have a heart if you know who you are go home now brother go and hug our mother, our father And if God allows, I will leave behind the happy family, that we once had.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/29/2024 7:55:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/4/2016 12:16:00 AM
Arfony,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:39:00 PM
This is So Freaking Good, Arfony,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/2/2016 6:01:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Arfony. :)
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Date: 6/2/2016 8:48:00 AM
Thank you

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