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Let's Use the Time That's Left

Life is pretty so why we spend our time on sorrow We all have bad times , but we all have good times as well I know life may get hard sometimes but it's like a beloving hell Time runs fast and wounds soon will be healed So why we spend our time on feeling regret and pain Let's use the time that's left before we get lost in vain

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White Sage

Date: 2/4/2016 9:11:00 AM

such postive poem Dalia, well expressed

Dalia Shahein
Date: 2/4/2016 10:54:00 PM

Thank you very much // :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/3/2015 6:37:00 PM

I respect the double meaning of "vain" in this pretty poem of positive eyes Dalia. Sometimes vanity prevents our hearts from playing freely, and to watch a noble opportunity suufocate is negligible. Your common sense is very beautiful dressed in poetry my Violet Poetess...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/3/2015 7:07:00 PM

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Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/3/2015 7:06:00 PM

Thank you so much my sweet justin every time u mesmerize me with beautiful, sweet words..u give me passion , hope and strength. Every time you delight me with your breath taking comments...I appreciate u snd ur words and I salute you my dear... Hugs :D

Francis Osho

Date: 12/3/2015 6:04:00 PM

i agree dalia. lets all laugh instead of crying.it is so easy. we just complicate it

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/3/2015 7:01:00 PM

Ur definitely right my friend...I appreciate your support and ur lovely comment thank you very much... :)