lets tango Poetry Contest

I win- I love you more
I still love you
outside the closed door.
I love you with tears,
knocking until my knuckles bleed
so now I sit outside in silence
enjoying your noise instead.
I was the only one
who meant what I said.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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March 24, 2024 at 9:39 AM
I don't know what this contest was about, but you have an interesting tango going on here Dakota. Knuckles knocking; blood red rose, and you and the other are dancing seperately... very interesting. Thanks
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