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Let's Tango

Fragrance night, spicy Breeze tangoes near tomorrow to green world stage raves Howling blues stir lilac dark Starlight, whistling in the park Clouds keep on drifting in times of vanishing moon It's nature's wild dance a sultry summer tango when super moon turns mango
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Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 11:18 PM
Love this set . Such nice imagery. A fave
Buehler Avatar
December 30, 2024 at 1:15 PM
I'm very delighted! Thank you for the pleasure of your comment and your fave. :)
Bowring Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 12:31 PM
Dear Evelyn, this is so beautifully and artistically penned. I love the stunning imagery that you have so skilfully captured. The picture is perfect too. Your pen dips into the poet’ s palette to sculpture such wonderful, colourful scenery in such a masterful way, ‘ Howling blues stir lilac dark’ ‘ when super moon turns mango’. A mango moon - so creative! Really enjoyed sharing this enchanted evening with your artistic flair on display. Loved it. Always in awe dear friend. Hugs, blessings xx
Buehler Avatar
April 4, 2024 at 7:58 PM
My dear friend, I am so delighted that the images and colors of this poem were pleasing to you. Thank you for your expressions of appreciation, which gladden my heart. Blessings and hugs xx
One Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 11:57 AM
Vivid imagery and a lovely entry for the contest..
Buehler Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 3:23 PM
Many thanks, Silent One.
Pandit Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 6:03 AM
Much enjoyed the colorful and bouncy voice of your poem, Evelyn. Lovely images you convey woven in nature.
Buehler Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 3:22 PM
I'm so glad! Deepest thanks, my friend.
Empress Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 1:55 AM
Dear evelyn, wow! This is magical and absolutely stunning how youv written this double tanka. So descriptively captivating! So many lines stood out for me especially “ Howling blues stir lilac dark Starlight, whistling in the park“ gorgeous! And love how you’ve rhymed there too.” Clouds keep on drifting in times of vanishing moon It's nature's wild dance“ melodiously magnificent! A fave this is! Im sure this will be a top winner! Best wishes .
Buehler Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 3:21 PM
Dear Ink, it was such a pleasure to read your heartwarming remarks. Thank you for sharing those gladdening impressions, and I am honored by your fave. Blessings to you.
Greenhough Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 9:59 PM
I'm looking forward to that mango moon. I like this poem for its many sultry images.
Buehler Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 3:04 PM
Thank you very much for taking the time to express your pleasure in this poem. Happy Easter.
Rodgers Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 7:56 PM
Dear Evelyn, your poem dances with the essence of a sultry summer night. The imagery of fragrant breezes and howling blues paints a fascinating picture of nature's wild dance. Through your words, we feel the pulsating rhythm of the tango echoing in the starlit sky. I love how the juxtaposition of fleeting moments and eternal dances evokes a sense of both urgency and timelessness. Truly, a mesmerizing ode to the enchanting beauty of the natural world and the eternal allure of dance. - Blessings, Daniel
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 9:16 PM
I am ever so pleased that you enjoyed this poem about nature's dance, dear friend. I appreciate each lovely compliment. All good wishes, Evelyn
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 5:35 PM
Your use of colors in the most pleasant ways!
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 9:09 PM
Deepest thanks, Kim.
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