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Let's Tango

She was staring into space. Suddenly she saw a face. From a misty haze of yellow Spoke a nazel voice, quite mellow, "Join me please, come, let's tango." Snatched away! Where did that man go? Not too sure, was this a daydream? Sat alone beside the dance scene. Passing through the foggy crowd, She heard the silence in the loud. He was nowhere to be found! Why did she dream of him, his sound? As she was exiting the venue, A tap on her arm felt from guess who! It was real. She felt her heart glow. He repeated, "Come, let's tango."

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Date: 3/20/2024 1:12:00 PM
That’s lovely Natasha, a dream come true, maybe they’ll tango together forever… Beryl
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 3/24/2024 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Beryl :-D all the best x
Date: 3/19/2024 8:07:00 PM
Dear Natasha, your poem dances through the realms of imagination and reality with grace and intrigue. The imagery of a mysterious encounter is filled with a sense of wonder and curiosity. I love how your poetic words evoke a dreamlike atmosphere, blurring the lines between fantasy and actuality. Natasha the poem is a captivating journey that leaves the me pondering the mysteries of chance and connection. Truly a tango of the mind and heart. - Blessings, Daniel
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 3/20/2024 7:59:00 AM
Wow, thank you so much for this amazing feedback! I think I misunderstood the contest but I thought it would be good to create a poem in line with the offered title. It's clear that you give very deep thought to the poetry you read and it truly is encouraging. So thank you for your thoughts. Warm wishes :-D
Date: 3/19/2024 3:37:00 PM
I really like this Natasha...Debx
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Natasha L Scragg
Date: 3/19/2024 3:39:00 PM
Thank you Deb :-D

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