Let's Tango

She was staring into space.
Suddenly she saw a face.
From a misty haze of yellow
Spoke a nazel voice, quite mellow,
"Join me please, come, let's tango."
Snatched away! Where did that man go?
Not too sure, was this a daydream?
Sat alone beside the dance scene.
Passing through the foggy crowd,
She heard the silence in the loud.
He was nowhere to be found!
Why did she dream of him, his sound?
As she was exiting the venue,
A tap on her arm felt from guess who!
It was real. She felt her heart glow.
He repeated, "Come, let's tango."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Edmonds  Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 1:12 PM
That’s lovely Natasha, a dream come true, maybe they’ll tango together forever… Beryl
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March 24, 2024 at 9:37 AM
Thanks Beryl :-D all the best x
Rodgers Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 8:07 PM
Dear Natasha, your poem dances through the realms of imagination and reality with grace and intrigue. The imagery of a mysterious encounter is filled with a sense of wonder and curiosity. I love how your poetic words evoke a dreamlike atmosphere, blurring the lines between fantasy and actuality. Natasha the poem is a captivating journey that leaves the me pondering the mysteries of chance and connection. Truly a tango of the mind and heart. - Blessings, Daniel
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March 20, 2024 at 7:59 AM
Wow, thank you so much for this amazing feedback! I think I misunderstood the contest but I thought it would be good to create a poem in line with the offered title. It's clear that you give very deep thought to the poetry you read and it truly is encouraging. So thank you for your thoughts. Warm wishes :-D
M  Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 3:37 PM
I really like this Natasha...Debx
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March 19, 2024 at 3:39 PM
Thank you Deb :-D
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