Let's Talk

You were half dead back then
now I am still in a quarter
Do you regret that they've met
Yes I do sinking in that water
What water do you mean
The one the willow wept in
Did you stop now and forever
You tell me if you claim being that clever



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Capitano Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 6:02 AM
Very cool image of the willow weeping.
Willow Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 6:07 AM
Thank you, Phil! WW
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