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Let's Take a Ride

Let’s take a fun ride where we want to go Maybe we can sail in the open sea Watch the seabirds fly and go with the flow Let’s take a ride, together to be free We can ride our bikes in wind to the shore Maybe we can sail in the open sea Or we can take a convertible tour Let’s ride away and find all that we see We can ride our bikes in the wind to the shore Or a horse and carriage, just you and me Galloping through the snow sparkling white Let’s ride away and find all that we see Leave troubles behind to set in the night Let’s ride with our lives, as it’s meant to be Galloping through the snow sparkling white We can unlock each moment with this key Let’s take a fun ride where we want to go Let’s ride with our lives, as it’s meant to be Watch the seabirds fly and go with the flow Heidi Sands 2/10/19

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Date: 2/13/2019 3:34:00 PM
Heidi this is delightful! You had me at the title! :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2019 3:37:00 PM
Nice to hear that. Thank you P.S. :)
Date: 2/13/2019 1:33:00 AM
What fun times you have "riding," Heidi. Especially love the image of riding in a horse-drawn sleigh while snow is falling. Such a delight to read! Hugs, Carolyn
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2019 8:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Carolyn. I appreciate your comment on this :)
Date: 2/12/2019 11:36:00 AM
Let's be free you and me...A lovely invitation...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2019 3:01:00 PM
Ok . You are invited. Thank you Arturo :)
Date: 2/12/2019 5:44:00 AM
Your poem uplifted my heart and mind taken them onto the sphere of freedom divine dearest, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2019 6:53:00 AM
Very nice to hear. Thank you Demetrios. Have a nice day! :)
Date: 2/12/2019 3:30:00 AM
- A lovely poem ... "go with the flow" , Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/12/2019 6:52:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, yes :) Have a nice day!
Date: 2/11/2019 2:40:00 PM
Swept away reading this! Wonderful :) xomo!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2019 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. It is nice to take a break from everything once in a while. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 2/11/2019 12:54:00 PM
a glowing piece exuberant in its imagery...i love this, heidi... huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2019 1:34:00 PM
Thank you very much Nette. I appreciate all your support :)
Date: 2/11/2019 8:55:00 AM
This is a wonderful poem, Heidi. I have never tried this form before but you may have inspired me to try one. Lovely write! Hugs Charlie
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2019 1:34:00 PM
That is great to hear Charlie. I hope you do! Thank you for your kind comment :)
Date: 2/11/2019 7:34:00 AM
A very nicely done poem. Fast moving with lots of imagery.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thank you very much Bette :)
Date: 2/11/2019 6:57:00 AM
Excellent poetry, Heidi..you do so well in these rhyming forms. A pleasant read ..beautiful flow and tone. Enjoyed reading this bouncy write.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2019 7:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate all your support :)
Date: 2/11/2019 6:44:00 AM
Hi Heide. you have shared some beautiful moments the terzanelle form. You have used the form so well in this fun poem. As I did read I felt the joy rise within me. This is one beautiful ride I wouldn't mind taking. A fave. have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/11/2019 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Mike. I am happy you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comment :)
Date: 2/10/2019 8:21:00 PM
I like the way you've taken advantage of the 'terzanelle' form to spread your positive message! :) gw
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/10/2019 8:27:00 PM
Thank you Gershon :)

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