Heidi Sands Poet Terzanelle

Let's Take a Ride

Let’s take a fun ride where we want to go
Maybe we can sail in the open sea
Watch the seabirds fly and go with the flow

Let’s take a ride, together to be free
We can ride our bikes in wind to the shore
Maybe we can sail in the open sea

Or we can take a convertible tour
Let’s ride away and find all that we see
We can ride our bikes in the wind to the shore

Or a horse and carriage, just you and me
Galloping through the snow sparkling white
Let’s ride away and find all that we see

Leave troubles behind to set in the night
Let’s ride with our lives, as it’s meant to be
Galloping through the snow sparkling white

We can unlock each moment with this key
Let’s take a fun ride where we want to go
Let’s ride with our lives, as it’s meant to be
Watch the seabirds fly and go with the flow


Heidi Sands  

2/10/19

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P.S. Awtry February 13, 2019 at 3:34 PM Heidi this is delightful! You had me at the title! :) Heidi Sands February 13, 2019 at 3:37 PM Nice to hear that. Thank you P.S. :)

Carolyn Devonshire February 13, 2019 at 1:33 AM What fun times you have "riding," Heidi. Especially love the image of riding in a horse-drawn sleigh while snow is falling. Such a delight to read! Hugs, Carolyn Heidi Sands February 13, 2019 at 8:57 AM Thank you very much Carolyn. I appreciate your comment on this :)

Arturo Michael February 12, 2019 at 11:36 AM Let's be free you and me...A lovely invitation... Heidi Sands February 12, 2019 at 3:01 PM Ok . You are invited. Thank you Arturo :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 12, 2019 at 5:44 AM Your poem uplifted my heart and mind taken them onto the sphere of freedom divine dearest, Heidi! Heidi Sands February 12, 2019 at 6:53 AM Very nice to hear. Thank you Demetrios. Have a nice day! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2019 at 3:30 AM - A lovely poem ... "go with the flow" , Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Heidi Sands February 12, 2019 at 6:52 AM Thank you Anne-Lise, yes :) Have a nice day!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 11, 2019 at 2:40 PM Swept away reading this! Wonderful :) xomo! Heidi Sands February 11, 2019 at 2:49 PM Thank you Maureen. It is nice to take a break from everything once in a while. I appreciate your comment :)

Nette Onclaud February 11, 2019 at 12:54 PM a glowing piece exuberant in its imagery...i love this, heidi... huggs Heidi Sands February 11, 2019 at 1:34 PM Thank you very much Nette. I appreciate all your support :)

Charles Messina February 11, 2019 at 8:55 AM This is a wonderful poem, Heidi. I have never tried this form before but you may have inspired me to try one. Lovely write! Hugs Charlie Heidi Sands February 11, 2019 at 1:34 PM That is great to hear Charlie. I hope you do! Thank you for your kind comment :)

Bette Bavington February 11, 2019 at 7:34 AM A very nicely done poem. Fast moving with lots of imagery. Heidi Sands February 11, 2019 at 7:40 AM Thank you very much Bette :)

Vijay Pandit February 11, 2019 at 6:57 AM Excellent poetry, Heidi..you do so well in these rhyming forms. A pleasant read ..beautiful flow and tone. Enjoyed reading this bouncy write. Heidi Sands February 11, 2019 at 7:17 AM Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate all your support :)

Vladislav Raven February 11, 2019 at 6:44 AM Hi Heide. you have shared some beautiful moments the terzanelle form. You have used the form so well in this fun poem. As I did read I felt the joy rise within me. This is one beautiful ride I wouldn't mind taking. A fave. have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX Heidi Sands February 11, 2019 at 7:17 AM Thank you Mike. I am happy you enjoyed it. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Gershon Wolf February 10, 2019 at 8:21 PM I like the way you've taken advantage of the 'terzanelle' form to spread your positive message! :) gw Heidi Sands February 10, 2019 at 8:27 PM Thank you Gershon :)