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Lets Rhyme

Soon it will be a cold winter's day, hot chocolate is great for any holiday. I want to go out and play, let's go riding in a sleigh. Now to stop at the big buffet, our waist will look like the freeway. The dessert table is as long as my driveway, what a big sugar display. We will walk by the bay, no riding home for me and Jay. My full stomach feels like doomsday, this sure was a wonderful feast day. In the tree sits a big fat blue jay, we are like him and cannot fly away.

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Pardy Mupfumbu

Date: 12/26/2023 5:48:00 AM

Let's rhyme, let's vibe

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2023 7:48:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/5/2023 9:03:00 AM

A lovely Let’s rhyme for the winter time Paula. All the best, Belle

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/26/2023 7:46:00 AM

I just found your note... Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad you like my fun write. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/30/2023 11:55:00 AM

Paula, your imagery just made me smile! This poem is a delight of color and sensory images! This poem is delightful and delicious. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/30/2023 7:36:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found my write to be a delight of color/sensory images/delightful/delicious/made you smile. Your kind words put a smile on my heart. Smiles are free so give them away. "Smile" Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/30/2023 6:29:00 AM

Got some good rhyming going on in this one. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/30/2023 7:31:00 PM

Thanks for your notes. Glad you enjoyed my fun poetry write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/28/2023 3:15:00 PM

your poem made me chuckle a bit...the rhymes tickled my funny bone for sure. I think my stomach felt like doomsday last Thursday after Thanksgiving...I think I'm still stuffed. Enjoyed your poem...have a creative evening, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/29/2023 7:32:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad my fun Rhyme write made you chuckle. Oh Yes, a stomach feels like doomsday after a big Thanksgiving holiday meal. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Silent One

Date: 11/28/2023 11:22:00 AM

Full stomach feels like doomsday, that made me smile.. your poem rhymes and flows so well... loved it.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/29/2023 7:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you love my fun Rhyme write. Oh Yes, a stomach feels like doomsday, after a big buffet/after a big holiday meal. So glad I made your smile. Smiles are free so give them away. "Smile" Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 11/28/2023 8:10:00 AM

Thanks for the smiles Paula :-) Your poem was a fun and enjoyable read, and just what I needed today. Hugs Anne :-)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/29/2023 7:22:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my write to be fun/enjoyable read/just what you needed today. I love to hear this. I gave you a smile/you gave me a smile back. Thanks... Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/28/2023 7:18:00 AM

Got a chuckle out of your delightful imagery, Paula! A fave for me! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/29/2023 7:20:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you got a chuckle out of my fun write. I see FAV??? Thanks... That makes me very happy. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/28/2023 7:01:00 AM

Lets Rhyme~Date Written:11/28/2023