Paula Goldsmith Poet Monorhyme

Lets Rhyme

Soon it will be a cold winter's day, 
hot chocolate is great for any holiday. 
I want to go out and play, 
let's go riding in a sleigh. 


Now to stop at the big buffet,  
our waist will look like the freeway. 
The dessert table is as long as my driveway, 
what a big sugar display. 


We will walk by the bay, 
no riding home for me and Jay. 
My full stomach feels like doomsday, 
this sure was a wonderful feast day.  


In the tree sits a big fat blue jay, 
we are like him and cannot fly away.

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Pardy Mupfumbu December 26, 2023 at 5:48 AM Let's rhyme, let's vibe Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2023 at 7:48 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Beryl Edmonds December 5, 2023 at 9:03 AM A lovely Let’s rhyme for the winter time Paula. All the best, Belle Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2023 at 7:46 AM I just found your note... Thanks for your note and for your best. Glad you like my fun write. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Sam Kauffman November 30, 2023 at 11:55 AM Paula, your imagery just made me smile! This poem is a delight of color and sensory images! This poem is delightful and delicious. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings! Paula Goldsmith November 30, 2023 at 7:36 PM Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found my write to be a delight of color/sensory images/delightful/delicious/made you smile. Your kind words put a smile on my heart. Smiles are free so give them away. "Smile" Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Sara Kendrick November 30, 2023 at 6:29 AM Got some good rhyming going on in this one. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K Paula Goldsmith November 30, 2023 at 7:31 PM  Thanks for your notes. Glad you enjoyed my fun  poetry write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Silent One November 28, 2023 at 11:22 AM Full stomach feels like doomsday, that made me smile.. your poem rhymes and flows so well... loved it. Paula Goldsmith November 29, 2023 at 7:28 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you love my fun Rhyme write. Oh Yes, a stomach feels like doomsday, after a big buffet/after a big holiday meal. So glad I made your smile. Smiles are free so give them away. "Smile"  Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Anne E Sangster - K November 28, 2023 at 8:10 AM Thanks for the smiles Paula :-) Your poem was a fun and enjoyable read, and just what I needed today. Hugs Anne :-) Paula Goldsmith November 29, 2023 at 7:22 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you found my write to be fun/enjoyable read/just what you needed today. I love to hear this. I gave you a smile/you gave me a smile back. Thanks...  Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Kim Rodrigues November 28, 2023 at 7:18 AM Got a chuckle out of your delightful imagery, Paula! A fave for me! :) Paula Goldsmith November 29, 2023 at 7:20 AM Thanks for your note. Glad you got a chuckle out of my fun write. I see FAV??? Thanks... That makes me very happy. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Paula Goldsmith November 28, 2023 at 7:01 AM Lets Rhyme~Date Written:11/28/2023