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when I lie down, please don’t be
moaning, blaming, regretting,
imprisoning me in bricks, 
dispiriting my last party
an event of the century
wear pink and you’re invited 
free flow whiskey, intense weed
my favorite punk-pop indie
performing songs you relish

I'm lying down, set me free
let the flames unchain my leash 
erase the shame caused by me
burn our pain and grant our wishes
count to three announce proudly
disappointment deleted.

if there’s still some time to give
plant a tree
above the remain of me

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Date: 3/27/2025 2:30:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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