Let's minichu on Feelings: of nostalgia

I become  nostalgic 
longingly when reminisce good old cheerful times
dive in quick

Romantic dreams
Fresh, hopeful, innocent dimes
Joy Screams

Why now
Unpleasant climes
Bow

I become  nostalgic 
Fresh, hopeful, innocent dimes
Bow


Note:
Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows:
1. Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)
2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 
3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of  stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3.
4. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting.
5. Syllable count : 
Stanza 1: 6,12,3 
Stanza 2: 4,8,2
Stanza 3: 2,4,1
Stanza 4: 6,8,1.
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Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 10:33 AM
One of yours I missed. Very nice. I like how you offer explanation of your unique form here. Thanks for my recent win
Chutani Avatar
June 1, 2026 at 6:51 PM
Andrea, thanks & welcome always.
George Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 12:25 AM
Beautiful illustration of the Minichu form. You seem to be so adept in the use of this poetic form.
Chutani Avatar
March 20, 2026 at 10:07 PM
Thanks Valsa. This form is my creation. So, I hv to be careful that I set up a good example so that it becomes easy for others to follow, especially those who want to participate in my contests. Best. Mohan
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