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This poem is an example for my latest Minichu contest. Best wishes to all soupers for participating. Please submit new poems only. Thanks.

Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows: 1. Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) 2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. 4. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting. 5. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 Stanza 2: 4,8,2 Stanza 3: 2,4,1 Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

Let's Minichu on Colours of Autumn

beneath the golden hues
lurks the befall of proud expanse of greens of yore
sun they chewed!

colour facade
gnawed warmth, melancholy gore
what fraud!!

In lust
of nature's core
dust!!!

beneath the golden hues
gnawed warmth, melancholy gore
dust!!!
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