Let's Make This True

Oh, to dance free as the moon bathes us in light Basking in God’s eternal luminary glow This is what I wish for, this evening, my darling This is my dream, I want you to know The night’s music calls out to us both, melodically As hand in hand, we traverse the glen The moon catches and highlights your natural beauty As I fall in love all over again Praying this evening to never end, Woe, if ever to end! The perfumes of flowers, such as lilacs and roses Entice us; carry us, to where we belong Wafted on breezes, there on clouds we are floating As we dance to evenings sweetest of songs Where, here in embrace, I hold you so tightly With never intention of letting go My darling, our heartbeats, regale us in unison As gently we sway, lasting and slow Basking in God’s eternal luminary glow This is my dream, I want you to know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 2/14/2009 10:13:00 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful, Michael. You have proven again that you're a master of the love poem! So very lovely. (Big Sigh). Hugs, Donna
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Date: 2/12/2009 4:05:00 PM
Beauitful write to the lady you love,God Bless,Marie
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Date: 2/12/2009 3:13:00 PM
What an uplifting poem! Nice use of imagery. Love the last stanza. Keep on writing. Thank you for your ongoing encouragement. Blessings to you. Karen
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Date: 2/12/2009 12:44:00 PM
Michael this is truly a beautiful rhyme. It is written with love, overflowing. You have penned so many wonderful, romantic lines in this very lovely poem! Great job, my friend! Love, Robin
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Date: 2/12/2009 10:20:00 AM
Love is in the air for sure, this write is beautiful....I am always taken by your captive writes, there is a lucky lady somewhere that is holding this close to her heart.....I did, and it was not even for me, but I can dream......always, Christy
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Date: 2/12/2009 9:13:00 AM
just in time for valentines a piece in here taste. john
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Date: 2/12/2009 8:11:00 AM
Lovely work Michael.Rgds Bian & thanks or your welcome blog comment
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Date: 2/12/2009 6:07:00 AM
Michael this is what I was just talking about in my reply to your soup mail, BTW you have mail - Loved the flow and rhyme of this poem but the message of love is what really makes this poem great - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/12/2009 5:35:00 AM
You know your writing is so well done I just want to keep deleting you from one of my favs just to keep adding you on :) thanks
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Date: 2/12/2009 5:09:00 AM
This is precious Michael, very beautiful. Laurie
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Date: 2/12/2009 4:48:00 AM
wonderfully written... you words so calm and touching, right to the heart!! loved it... and thank you for your lovely comment... it is always a thrill... ~ Arany
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Date: 2/12/2009 4:44:00 AM
So beautiful Michael..expressed well and drips with love. Well done.
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