Red Fiery Poet Rhyme

Lets Make Love - 1

Can I sleep in your dreams
you can be
one with me
Here I dive in your soul
hold my hands and make me yours
kiss my neck…
let us make…
love for ever
its now or never
dont go away
its time to say
that I love you
and you love me
can you say?
in this way…
close your eyes…
lets us fly…
in the sky…
cross the ocean…
miles and millions…
lets make love…
lets make love…

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Harry Horsman January 17, 2012 at 9:11 AM Wow Red, i think i'm too old for this, but as a poem it is awesome, as are you. harry

Elizabeth Wesley December 16, 2011 at 1:57 PM Wonderful idea Red but reality tells me I have to make soup and sometimes go to the bathroom. Not romantic I know - bang me on the head!

Sarah Seraphin December 6, 2011 at 10:31 AM * "YESSSS * 'LETS MAKE LUV' * I COMPLETELY LOVE THIS BEAUTIFUL PAINTING * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL LADY * DEFINITELY BEFITTING OF YOUR BEAUTIES CHOSEN PENS NAME * 'FIERY RED' * SPINNING AMID THE FLAMES OF SOMETHING BEAUTIFUL * HAPPY HOLIDAYS UNTO YOU MY DEAR * KEEP BRUSHING THE TIMELESS BEAUTY * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Sidney Hall Mad Poet December 4, 2011 at 12:26 PM Smriti, How can I forget you. A beautiful poem I cant wait to read the rest

Kash Poet October 2, 2011 at 1:56 PM A very good start here of the series~~

Elizabeth Wesley September 19, 2011 at 10:49 PM The flow is beautiful and the idea fascinates.

Wayne Hill September 10, 2011 at 6:33 PM This is the third site I have read this wonderful poem in. I wish all lovers had this sense of soul diving unrestrained passion!!!!

Kash Poet July 29, 2011 at 6:23 PM Passionate and sensuous write....

Jack Ross Jr. July 29, 2011 at 5:16 PM fervent and sensous write, very nicely worded with good methaphores..best wishes...old Jack