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Treasured Moments

School is synonymous with happiness and best friends
That I treasure even four and a half decades 
Down the line and we all are still connected
We still become nostalgic about
Sharing tiffins and story telling in lunch breaks
Smuggling the so romantic Barbara Cartland's 
And comics in texts books for fair exchange
Yelling and jumping in the throw-ball court
As if fun games were just then or never
Our overprotective teachers and caring nuns
Lined us up under mango trees on river banks
To recite and enjoy the music in poetry
While our eyes were either watching tempting mangoes overhead
Or distracted by the regattas from the Boat Club next door
Bidding farewell to friends and school we entered
Into an adolescent world of freedom encased in insecurities

February 9, 2016
Contest: Let's Hear It
Sponsor: Judy Konos

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/13/2016 9:20:00 PM
thanks for the reply
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:48:00 PM
Welcome!
Date: 2/11/2016 4:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Upma!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:48:00 PM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 2/11/2016 2:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Great poem.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/11/2016 4:17:00 AM
Thanks Susan!
Date: 2/10/2016 9:15:00 AM
What lovely memories, Balveen. I know a place in PR that fits your description well.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:13:00 PM
How interesting! Wonder if I can find its pics on the net! Thanks for the effort James! Love...
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James Inman
Date: 2/11/2016 7:48:00 AM
Club Náutico de San Juan. Near the Condado Lagoon off of the Bay of San Juan.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/11/2016 4:20:00 AM
Which is that place, James? Thanks for reading my memories!
Date: 2/10/2016 8:24:00 AM
Balveen, congratulations on your Let's Hear It win. LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/11/2016 4:20:00 AM
Thanks Linda!

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