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Treasured Moments School is synonymous with happiness and best friends That I treasure even four and a half decades Down the line and we all are still connected We still become nostalgic about Sharing tiffins and story telling in lunch breaks Smuggling the so romantic Barbara Cartland's And comics in texts books for fair exchange Yelling and jumping in the throw-ball court As if fun games were just then or never Our overprotective teachers and caring nuns Lined us up under mango trees on river banks To recite and enjoy the music in poetry While our eyes were either watching tempting mangoes overhead Or distracted by the regattas from the Boat Club next door Bidding farewell to friends and school we entered Into an adolescent world of freedom encased in insecurities February 9, 2016 Contest: Let's Hear It Sponsor: Judy Konos

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Date: 2/13/2016 9:20:00 PM
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:48:00 PM
Welcome!
Date: 2/11/2016 4:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thanks Upma!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 6:48:00 PM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 2/11/2016 2:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Great poem.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/11/2016 4:17:00 AM
Thanks Susan!
Date: 2/10/2016 9:15:00 AM
What lovely memories, Balveen. I know a place in PR that fits your description well.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/14/2016 7:13:00 PM
How interesting! Wonder if I can find its pics on the net! Thanks for the effort James! Love...
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James Inman
Date: 2/11/2016 7:48:00 AM
Club Náutico de San Juan. Near the Condado Lagoon off of the Bay of San Juan.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/11/2016 4:20:00 AM
Which is that place, James? Thanks for reading my memories!
Date: 2/10/2016 8:24:00 AM
Balveen, congratulations on your Let's Hear It win. LINDA
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 2/11/2016 4:20:00 AM
Thanks Linda!

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