Let's Go Hiking

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Let's drift along paths of old heather, See today is beautiful weather. The lightest mist of dew still wet leaves Lying in fields in tightly bound sheaves. Meandering along citrus trees Sweet blossoms announce a bumper crop And fragrance grow up slopes to the top. A rill flows downhill forming a pool, We go into the water so cool, Let the sun shine in mid-summer heat Then we'll drink out our beer as a treat.

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Valsa George

Date: 1/3/2022 8:15:00 AM

On a summer day drinking a glass of beer is so refreshing especially after a trek ! You have painted lovely vistas here!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/22/2021 9:14:00 PM

Waiting for the Fall leaves to fall and the cool breeze to grace our souls.. another beautiful image.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2021 12:39:00 PM

A wonderful and succinct poem on the fun of hiking!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/21/2021 10:42:00 AM

A lovely walk along paths of old heather Victor, brings on a yearning to get out and about in the countryside… Hugs, Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/21/2021 10:28:00 AM

An exceptional depiction of a pleasant fall day with a companion. It's making me look forward to the fall. Hugs.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/21/2021 3:15:00 AM

Excellent, Victor Panagiota

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/21/2021 1:32:00 AM

Beautiful painting of the awesome scenery you seem to have enjoyed in this hike, Victor, loved the walk:)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/20/2021 7:57:00 PM

Victor, you communicate exquisite beauty. Enjoying the chilly weather via your photographic eyes.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/20/2021 7:16:00 PM

Yes 'let's go hiking' Victor, and maybe i'll find some inspiration also. this is excellent poetry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/20/2021 11:01:00 AM

- Every day I go for a walk in beautiful nature ... a lovely poem, Victor :) - Have a wonderful weekend ... enjoy the nature :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)