Victor Buhagiar Poet Couplet

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Let's Go Hiking

Let's drift along paths of old heather,
See today is beautiful weather.
The lightest mist of dew still wet leaves
Lying in fields in tightly bound sheaves.
Meandering along citrus trees
Sweet blossoms announce a bumper crop
And fragrance grow up slopes to the top.
A rill flows downhill forming a pool,
We go into the water so cool,
Let the sun shine in mid-summer heat
Then we'll drink out our beer as a treat.

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Valsa George January 3, 2022 at 8:15 AM On a summer day drinking a glass of beer is so refreshing especially after a trek ! You have painted lovely vistas here!

Eve Roper August 22, 2021 at 9:14 PM Waiting for the Fall leaves to fall and the cool breeze to grace our souls.. another beautiful image.

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2021 at 12:39 PM A wonderful and succinct poem on the fun of hiking!

Beryl Edmonds August 21, 2021 at 10:42 AM A lovely walk along paths of old heather Victor, brings on a yearning to get out and about in the countryside… Hugs, Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler August 21, 2021 at 10:28 AM An exceptional depiction of a pleasant fall day with a companion. It's making me look forward to the fall. Hugs.

Panagiota Romios August 21, 2021 at 3:15 AM Excellent, Victor Panagiota

Joanna Daniel August 21, 2021 at 1:32 AM Beautiful painting of the awesome scenery you seem to have enjoyed in this hike, Victor, loved the walk:)

Sotto Poet August 20, 2021 at 7:57 PM Victor, you communicate exquisite beauty. Enjoying the chilly weather via your photographic eyes.

Harry Horsman August 20, 2021 at 7:16 PM Yes 'let's go hiking' Victor, and maybe i'll find some inspiration also. this is excellent poetry

Anne-Lise Andresen August 20, 2021 at 11:01 AM - Every day I go for a walk in beautiful nature ... a lovely poem, Victor :) - Have a wonderful weekend ... enjoy the nature :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit August 20, 2021 at 5:21 AM Splendid beauty you convey, Victor, taking the reader with you. Great imagery, as always.

Delice Arleen Skelly August 20, 2021 at 5:01 AM Nice to go on a midsummer trek Victor, enjoying nature....Delice

Supraja Kannan August 20, 2021 at 2:53 AM Enjoyed the hike... Thanks for taking us along...

Tom Cunningham August 20, 2021 at 1:17 AM Used to do a lot of hiking years ago, there's nothing better than being out and about amongst nature. Tom

Eve Roper August 20, 2021 at 12:07 AM Enjoying the cool weather through your eyes of imagery.